[drbits]

I saw your two JPGs yesterday (my time).

In terms of appearance, it is great. My one suggestion is to make the background copy of the logo almost a watermark. It is two or three times to visible and hides your text. Remember, most people will view this is Adobe Reader, not print it.

I would like to suggest that you put your outline (table of contents - Table des matières) in the thread here.

I cannot read French, I can only skim it for the general meaning, but the content it looks good. Is there a new user you can ask to read it?

I would also create a thread in which the first message is the text of the content, and update it as you go.

If this were intended for US readers, I would use the MS Word grammar checker to check for "Grade Level" and I almost always aim for 8th or 9th grade reading level (the average adult reading level is 9th to 10th grade here).